something that requires more than a yes or no answer. Looks like you are overthinking here, you can't have a list of statements dude. Practice and improve. Think about about adding value with banter, teasing,dhv.

if you need to convince her to stay over ,that's an issue.

She is already coming at your place, if you are doing good she will stay.

I like your style, pretty chill and sarcastic. Some girls are not really fun or dont understand sarcasm, in this case i slow down humor , pretty boring for me though.

You could do a bit of qualification and make her invest a bit more.

i learned a lot with those types of LR.I was the kind of guy to never persist because did not want to look needy but it is finally just a skill to learn like others and let the ego behind.
Thanks man.