I am curious about your second paragraph regarding not following a statement with a question. I get that you want her to invest without being promoted with a question, but you also want to offer value in your messaging so she doesn't get bored or disinterested with you unnecessarily. But I'm open to your thoughts on this.
Honestly, it’s more just keeping things simple is what I was getting at. I think he was writing too much in 1 message. Not even breaking them up.
For example, he could have said the honey moon line as one statement. Then when she replies to that, he could have responded with the give my the basics line after. Breaking down the texts into separate parts.
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Good response here. Seems effective at doing several things.
Additionally, I would also suggest to avoid adding a statement followed by a question all in the same message. You did it twice.
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I am curious about your second paragraph regarding not following a statement with a question. I get that you want her to invest without being promoted with a question, but you also want to offer value in your messaging so she doesn't get bored or disinterested with you unnecessarily. But I'm open to your thoughts on this.
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Honestly, it’s more just keeping things simple is what I was getting at. I think he was writing too much in 1 message. Not even breaking them up.
For example, he could have said the honey moon line as one statement. Then when she replies to that, he could have responded with the give my the basics line after. Breaking down the texts into separate parts.
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Agreed.
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I'll try to be more succinct