(It's not uploading in the same order that is displayed on my profile so idgaf) 1 headshot 2 walking black jacket 3 camera stand photo 4 guitar 5 pet dog Here's my bio 6'1 | Sexologist My Passion is travelling around the world and seductively whispering French in your ear. Looking for a cool girl who enjoys a mix of Rough and Sensual. Strengths: Being dominant,BDSM, Cracking inappropriate jokes, and Cuddling. Weaknesses: Great ass and Accents. Prompts( photo attached) Tried Alex's reccomended bios (youtube video) And none worked so I just went with his as a last resort Any feedback is reccomended by all means be harsh when you critisize me

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H

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I had the same thoughts at Luis before reading his comment.

You come off as a nice guy in these photos (the quality are great). More wholesome. It doesn't match your bio. Photo 3 is the only one you look a little more rugged and tough.

The bio reads as a f*ck boy, someone like Alex (which isn't an insult)

I realize you already mentioned this but, yes, you definitely needed some wax to comb/style your hair.

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What can I do to not come across as a nice guy I genuinely have no idea how

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Because I'm a balding fuck that's why it looks dogshit (unless I wax it up)

How can I not come across as a nice guy

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personally i wouldn't try to stop coming off as a nice guy. but rather make the bio match the style of the pictures.
one thing is not to make it generic and possibly add humor.
this is mine, you could tweak it to fit your own interests:

Into health, fitness, and personal growth.
Do dancing, jiu jitsu, lifting, and running.
Love spending time with my dog and going to the park.
Let's go karaoke, dancing, horror movies, and random adventures.
Handsome, charming, successful, and humble.

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Yeah, for the photos at least it would have benefited you to style the hair.

Well, your photos I don't think are bad and would definitely attract more wholesome/relationship type girls without a doubt. However, if your goal is to be more like your bio and looking to just smash chicks it's just adjusting the facial expression a bit different and posing with different body language.

Photo 2 is a quality photo but it seems too lighthearted and peaceful

Photo 4 you have a big smile and office nerd type vibes. You don't look like the kind of guy that is going to give it to a girl rough and dominate her.

Photo 5 for example, the black jacket/outfit is badass! I think if you weren't smirking and had a more serious look like in photo 3 you would come off tough and masculine.

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