The big issue overall is that your bio reads way to much like a resume. You have to keep in mind that women on dating apps make decisions based on emotions rather than facts (ie. making her laugh or feel intrigued is worth million time more than any fact you can write).
Lets start with the basics:
How tall are you
What city do you live in
What languages do you speak.
Tell me more about what kinds of girls you like? Slutty? More conservative?
What are some really unique things about you that no one expects?