How could we revive this? Could I say cat got your tounge or something along the lines of what you said we both worked at chic fil a for example

How can I improve that and be more to the point and not sound like a middle schooler ?

Thanks man appreciate the advice gonna head out with some friends soon.

What suggestions would you give of what I should take? Like types of pictures/ angles as many details as possible. Here are some others that may be options. Here’s a lot but be as brutally honest as possible always looking to improve and open to any suggestions. Thanks