Overall your text game is pretty poor. The main issue is that it is quite boring/cliche. There's nothing emotionally engaging in here at all. Nothing that dhvs you either or even grabs her attention. For example, your high school musical close was pretty bad, not to mention that it was way too early in the converssation to go for a close in the first place. Generally, avoid questions like "what's up " or "tell me about yourself" these are very generic and half the guys say that to her. Go through some of my love reports and look at the difference. Try to look for the differences