Hey - first of all awesome community! Probably one of the best I've come across so far concerning Online-/Textgame.
I'd say my Textgame is quite on point, however I never really get to show it since I don't really get matches - maybe I'm also a little bit too young for Tinder.
I know my bio is very provocative, any suggestions?
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Thank you for your feedback Jacob.
Deleted picture 4. Very interesting that my first picture comes off as tryhard with me watch - I didn't even think about that since I didn't even know the watch was there, it was 100% unintentional.
I know that my pictures are far away from perfect, but I never really find the time to shoot😅
I thought with a different writing I'd stand out more, maybe also too tryhard?
By the way, I cannot deny the influence of Max and Julien when it comes to my game in general.
Deleted the small d big heart.
Please don't be fat in real life was to actually screen fat girls out + provoke a shittest that I can easily pass. Deleted too.
I'm a student so I don't have a job, I thought director of first impressions would be fun.
Thank you for your suggestions! 👍🏼
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Photos: cringe and feels like you are trying to hide yourself.
1 - cringe and not natural, looks fake and don't show you. They are probably swiping left because of this. Need to go.
2 - looks gay, maybe if you are trying to hit on kpopers it would work.
3 - good, spontaneous and natural.
4 - dad/nerd. Need to go.
5 - good for last pic.
Well, you should try to put pictures that look more natural and show more yourself, sometimes being simple is the best way to go.
Bio description: cringe af and incoherent to your profile. You tried way too hard. You tried to be show confidence, but it is all clearly false, the line of small dick shows this, you depreciated yourself and sounded weak and kinda gay. The rest is all copied lines and shit and you finished super aggresive and negative idk why.
Conclusion: your profile seems fake, no original at all and a boring dude.
Being more honest is the answer.
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Thanks for your harsh but honest feedback Luiz (no worries I can take it haha)!
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With pictures in general it's hard everyone says different things. No selfies as a general rule. Side profile is better than looking directly in the camera (that's at least whar I've heard) and that's what I tried.
But yes you're right, my pictures could improve a lot, I just didn't really find the time to shoot yet😅
Agreed, I realized now how gamey my Bio really is and changed it completely.
The last line isn't meant to be agressive, I wanted to screen out fat girls and provoke shittests with the hot ones that I can easily pass. But deleted it too.
Will try - thank you!
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No problem, friend. Thankfully you didn't take it personal and got the idea. You are a great looking guy, if you be more yourself and show more about you, the girls surely will be more interested.
About the pictures, yeah, the only rule you cant break would be selfies and pics in the mirror in general. Looking directly to the câmera is a thing to avoid, you are right, but it is not a rule, it's like a technique to look better, so try to move just a little bit to the side and see if you look better that way. In my opinion, pictures with your head sideways should be photos from a certain distance, showing your body and not zoomed in, like a portrait.
And about the last line, I understand, but people don't, and there it is the problem...
This guy might help you, his channel is awesome https://youtu.be/cPv_b-th13M
This channel is trash, but this vídeo has some value
https://youtu.be/xmEf7v5gyKk
Good luck!