This is pretty good but you can do a lot better.
I think stick to 1-2 pics max with your dogs. You don't need to show all of them. Picture 2 can be done better so it looks less posed. Pic 4 isn't your best picture aesthetically. I assume picture 6 is with your parents? I would probably dump that one too. I get what you are going for there but I would drop it. Move up the surfing pic to number 3 maybe.
I would go 1, 2, 8 and 7 then add one more that isn't in this list.
Also maybe put something screening about what you want in a chick.
I use the following:
Weaknesses: Adventurous, sense of humor, cute smile, yoga pants & nice booty



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Looks like you have decent photos. The only one I would change is the topless one because it looks quite staged. Do you have a beach photo or something where it makes sense for your shirt to be off?
Im not 100% sure about the bio as it seems a bit too invested. I think Alex will give more advice but thats just my opinion.