Thanks for Great Article on Bio!

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Tweaked a few things... I am wanting your suggestions Alex and McBeard plz!

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avilench . Avatar

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I'll be honest! Your profile gives off way too much of a nice guy vibe. This will attract mainly asian girls who're looking for relationship (I'm assuming not your ideal demographic).

Let's take a look at your profile picture, your body language is beta, your smile looks forced and you are not jacked enough for a shirtless pic (no offense, I'm not either lol). The only pics I would keep from your current profile is 3,5,7. Those are decent. Do you have any other options as well?

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I dont have any other pics. 😭 im naturally super skinny and have a young nice-boy asian face so I dunno what else I can do lol.. maybe smile less?

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avilench . Avatar

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Well. you got 3 pretty decent pics so have the potential for good pics. Try to grow out a bit of facial hair and then do another photo shoot. I've seen other Asian guys struggle with the same issue but with some persistence (photoshoots) we ultimately put together a solid profile.
If you want to really improve your results I think you should focus on getting jacked. Train/eat properly for 3 months and your photos will look noticeably different. Also, if you want to go a step further you can try sarms.

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Aaron Johnson Avatar

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Yeah, the bio is good enough, but feels incongruent with many of your pics. I would honestly hit up Ciel Chen and see if you can get some commentary from him - that dude fucking nails the dominant Asian look.

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Bio is totally re written as well. Plz give me feedback. šŸ™

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Tweaked a bit. Any pics that MUST go?

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Jihn Carney Avatar

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i dont think the shirtless tops are helping you at all,mate. No.4 is what every other guy does so nah.

2,5 and 6 are essentially the same kind of pic.

3 seems good but the wholw thing is very happy dappy nothing sexually dominant about me.

they are quality shots for the most part btw but yeah nothing screams dominant

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Ideas on how to take pics to get more dominant look ?

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The biggest thing is to lose the toothy smile imo. I’d try to get pics where you have maybe a very slight smirk or are more serious. The biggest long-term change you can make is add muscle.

I would quickly lose the half-jacket picture, it looks very try-hard. Try to get more open, relaxed/hanging type of body language with a cheeky smirk or more of a smoulder

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Jihn Carney Avatar

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I'd observe some of the more popular guys here and see what their profile pics look like and take note of how they have their arms. It's more a mindset than a body posture. If you're mind isn't there then it will be blatantly obvious. See if you can a Demonstrating High Value picture.

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