Suggestions for improvement to my opening line

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My opening line:

"Picture 5: Being 5'9'' in heels is a deadly combination. How much can you squat in that special gear?"

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Don't complicate things. I would go for the trusty :" Can i be honest?" line (recommended by Alex).

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I haven't watched enough of Alex's video to know about that line, 'Can I be honest?' Are you suggesting to say this remark afterwards: 'Picture 5: 5'9'' and heels is a deadly combination'?

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Thomas  PT Avatar

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this always works for me ( Hey there I see you like the gym, I like that x)

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And 'x' is ass, smile, outfit, style, etc?

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