Hi again,

I've been experimenting planning a date when closing a number. I've got an infield recording of me doing it. It's about a minute long. Do you guys have any advice as to how I can make it smoother or improve in any way? I appreciate your time.

https://recorder.google.com/share/188da41b-a1f4-46d1-a2d1-8b5e820a6569

Thank you,
Ron