Your profile seems fine...Probably wouldn't have the topless gym selfie as the first one. But judging from those texts you haven't even tried to soft close a date. I personally try to soft close after a few flirty texts then go for a hard close and set up the date if she responds well to the soft close.

few things, go with 3 as main, shirtless selfie as second and your current number 2 is going to be number 3. Delete the rest. That will leave you with 3 solid pics. Get 1-2 more and youll crush tinder. If you have other options feel free to post them

I'd grade your profile a C but you have the SMV to get it up to an A- with the right photos.

subject matter: There's nothing going on in your pics. You're just there, You have 2 pics that are virtually identical.
Photo quality: shot at bad angles & images are not very sharp, look somewhat washed out.
Fashion: very average & the same in almost all the pics. In group pic the snow gear makes it difficult to distinguish which guy is you.

The hot girls are probably going with just as good looking guys who have more dynamic photos.

Good news is you're poster boy for swipe right with those pics. Well done. I'd exclude the shirtless one, they can see you're muscular. You're abs are just a few bf % from being something to really show off. Girls really like the v tapir which you aren't flexing here and the angle on your face is bad. All fixable if you put in good effort. I say shy away from the body pics unless you got something really special because the gym selfie is famously polarizing. Other than that great pics might emulate myself. The tats look good too.

Text game:
big problem here. By giving a girl shit about not being wordy enough you're turning the conversation into an argument and you're on the needy side. By complaining about not getting enough attention you're unknowingly sealing your fate.
Take the first "are you this talkative" as an example. She was literally laughing at your joke man. Thats the opportunity to say another banger or say literally anything while she's impressed by your wit. You took a win and made a loss of it. Just telling you how I see it.
Other than that you're too gamey. Using too many pre learned lines. Relying on these will rob you of creativity. Every girl is a little different (and should be approached as such) and they can tell usually when someone is going off a script. Be like Alex. He uses trusty lines but often he comes up with incredibly creative shit based on what the girl said or something in the moment. You will need to learn this.
You're doing well tho man keep at it

Btw how old are the girls you match with on average? I want to know your demographic

Agree with Nando, you could of closed pretty much all of those conversations. After your line of 'we shouldn't just be a tinder match', she agreed. At that point should of number closed and then that was done.