Profile Review 08/06/21

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O

3 Posts (+4), 8 Cmts (+3)

Hello everyone, here is my current tinder profile. I just got these pics at a photoshoot, used to get 1-2 matches a day before this with lower quality photos. Today is day 1 of these photos, so no consistent results yet. Any suggestions/critiques for photos/order and bio would be appreciated. Thanks.

Extra shots: in my reply to Clinton woodall on this post.

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Clinton Woodall Avatar

118 Posts (+42), 716 Cmts (+312)

Do you have other options you can post so we can see them as well?

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O

3 Posts (+4), 8 Cmts (+3)

Yes, here are some other options.

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9 Posts (+5), 212 Cmts (+56)

If I was you I'd only keep pic2 and 5, they're the ones where you look your best. The others either look too posed, or the body language isn't right.

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Max Fox Avatar

5 Posts (+2), 372 Cmts (+206)

5's a keeper, 3's marginal. I respectfully disagree about 1 because it's too posey and in particular you've forced the "looking away wistfully" thing so it just looks like side-eye. Not the news you want to hear but you'll need another photoshoot for best results.

Profile? I see where you're going with "in our temporary existence together" but many women won't, they'll think it means "short term only", re-word it

Dig deep and find another word than "nice" to use twice in your last sentence, maybe "cute smiles"

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O

3 Posts (+4), 8 Cmts (+3)

Appreciate the feedback Max. I have some other shots of me looking away/walking. But ill keep those suggestions in mind when i take more photos. Thanks.

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Max Fox Avatar

5 Posts (+2), 372 Cmts (+206)

You have other shots? Excellent, as Sam says the photos themselves are quality so there may well be other keepers that you overlooked

I think the top tip in that video is, make sure you're picking from 100 photos not 6 :)

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Sam Miller Avatar

8 Posts (+10), 580 Cmts (+268)

They're pretty good quality-wise, just that most of them look very posed and you don't have a ton of activity photos. Highly recommend Alex's video on this on the PlayingFire Yt, I'll link it below. I think you can keep 1 & 5 out of these.

(https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=baie2bL88A8)

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O

3 Posts (+4), 8 Cmts (+3)

Thanks for the feedback and link

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