Profile picture review

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Heya guys,

stumbled across PWF recently (about a week ago). As per my usual self, I dug myself into the content as I deem it quality content.

**So Alex, keep it up bro. Love you, no homo. **

Anyhow for some time now I've been keeping my distance from online dating, because honestly I just didn't like it to much and I hate(d) texting and much prefered vibing with bae in person but now with all the pandemic craze going on I wanted to increase my leads, as night-game currently is almost non-existent.

So I went in DEEP into your free content (for now) in regards to setting up a profile.

First week, I guess because I have just registered, it wen't okayish in terms of matches. Around 15 I think it was.

Starting with the second (this) week, I accendently bought a subscription for tinder gold instead of plus. I thought I might as well go all in, as it can only get better from here. But nada, really bad result around 4 likes from women (that I could see because of tinder gold) - they were not at all my type and 1 that I regarded as decently attractive and matched with.

So all in all, very poor results. Especially counting in the subscription and one accidental trigger of boost.

Now I am wondering of course, maybe there is something up with my profile that I have not realized yet. Maybe the pictures are bad, maybe I'm just ugly, maybe they don't convey a fun me.

**Whatever is up with it, I would be really grateful if you guys could rate and comment this profile (not just the pictures but also the bio, even though pretty standard) and hopefully give some expert insights on how to improve or rebuild it with more wit, charm and balls. **

Honest opinion please and sorry for writing that much guys, I am just really excited to get to know you ;) Hugs and kisses.

About the images. Starts off with my Tinder Bio, followed by 6 pictures in order of occurence. Then, my bumble bio and pictures in order of occurence.

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Welcome to pwf man. In terms of your profile, it’s hard for me to say because I don’t know which one of these pics you’re using, but I’d try this combination. Your bio is fine. Get rid of “fighting sports” though. Sounds a bit too violent. Let us know how it goes

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Hey Alex, thanks for your suggestions I just integrated them. Also cropped the first Tinder image to focus more on my face.

FYI: I wrote the order of images in the last line of my inital post. Easy to miss, I know :)

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Sorry, was in information reintegration mode :)

Thanks for welcoming me broski, I am happy to be part of your community and am very much looking forward to the growth that all of us can hopefully share. Meaning your business and our game!

I am curious. Are you planning on putting out infield content whenever this pandemic is over? Day and/or nightgame.

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Not bad, imo. 6/10 overall. Your first pics on both should be scrapped tho. Especially the one for bumble. It seems a bit sketchy to me. Really love the one of you looking over the river/gorge thing.

Also I know you’re using Alex’s template for the bio, but (again in my opinion) it doesn’t do enough to capture attention or elicit emotional response to get the match to want to engage you. Meaning you will have to convey so much more of your personality and value once you actually get the match, rather than them just being intrigued from the onset.

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Hey Harry, thanks alot for your reply. Appreciating it alot!

Could you elaborate some more on your points regarding the bio? Do you have any examples of what would elicit such an emotional response.

When I read what you were writing, the first thing that came to my mind are some form of CTA's (Call to action). Do you have any experience with them, if so how did they work out for you?

Additionally is it something in particular that you find off putting about the first tinder pic? Alex suggested me to basically keep it but am myself a little on the fence with it. Kept it though with a little bit of recropping.

Also haha to the sketchy comment. Never thought about it but jeah I do have a very stern/sktechy look on my face :D

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