Profile and bio critique + SMV rating

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J

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J

5 Posts (+3), 6 Cmts (+6)

Welcome any advice

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Sam Miller Avatar

8 Posts (+10), 580 Cmts (+268)

These photos are great, I would try to include any more high-quality ones with a group or an animal. The bio is a little wordy though and I might word it something like this.

World traveler (fav. trips were Amsterdam & Bejing)

Hobbies include:

  • Taekwondo
  • Cooking
  • Being Dominant

Weaknesses: Intelligence and girls with accents

This is just an example, feel free to modify but this bio is succinct and sexualizes a little to screen, which I've found crazy effective.

Hope this helps bro.

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Jordan McBarnett Avatar

4 Posts (+0), 4 Cmts (+2)

I like the photos, especially the third. But get a photo when you are not looking at the camera.

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avilench . Avatar

393 Posts (+1.3K), 15K Cmts (+5.3K)

Your SMV is pretty decent. But most pictures aren't that great. The only one I would use is #3. Do you have any other photo options?

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J

5 Posts (+3), 6 Cmts (+6)

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avilench . Avatar

393 Posts (+1.3K), 15K Cmts (+5.3K)

#10 is okay. The other ones I would not use. That would give you 2 photos which is definitely not enough. We need to get you a few more solid photos

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