Please Critic _ PICS and BIO

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I am new here, first time posting. you guys can be as brutally honest as you can be. I tried to make the bio as personal as I could but it is very inspired by the tips section about bio.

I had to lower the image size to be able to upload it. (just incase it looks blurry). The one with me shirt less is not uploaded on any apps. Do you guys think i got the physique to upload shirtless photo or do I wait until i get bigger. I do go to gym.

178 cm l Mongolian

· Great Oral skills
· Dominant
· Great Genes
· Fitness
· Expert Cuddler
· Embarassing myself when drunk... Long Story
· Can speak multi languages
· No felonies
· Very curious, willing to learn anything new.
· Books and Documentaries
· Creative
· 1 secret (only for those who ask)

Weakness: Nice Booties, Lips, honesty, Smiles and Smarts.

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avilench . Avatar

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Welcome to PWF man. Let’s start off with the pics since that’s by far the most important part. The only one I see that I think is usable is the one where you are in the dessert wearing the jacket. BUT, you need to photoshop it a bit and clear up the wrinkles/acne on face. Or just get someone on fiverr to do that. In terms of shirtless pics, I don’t think you are quite there yet. You are not far out though. Give it another few months

Here is a reworked version of your bio, I condensed it a bit

178cm

  • From Mongolia with Love
  • My Passion is Travel
  • Multi-lingual
  • Dominant
  • Great Oral skills
  • Expert Cuddler
  • 1 secret (only for those who ask)

Weaknesses: Booties, Honesty, Smiles and Smarts.

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Thanks you, I will make these changes asap. how many pic do you think I should have?

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avilench . Avatar

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Ideally you want at least 4. But right now you only have one that’s usable (out of this list). Do you have other options?

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