Pics and bio feedback
I just got some new pictures taken and want to make a new profile. I'm looking for feedback on my pictures and bio. I will ask some girls later as well and update this post.
For context, I'm a university student living in Germany, my target demographic is 18-25 year old students.
Previous profile pics and bio
- Red hat
- Gym
- Boat (this is not my pic, feel free to use it)
- Bird
Studying computer science and philosophy.
Grew up in Italy, so I know all the secret recipies to make amazing pasta.
The birds name is Johnny, he lives in South Africa. We became great friends after I rescued him heroically from a pack of lions. If the first date goes well, I'll let you pet him.
This profile got about 70 matches in 2 months.
With my new bio I want to screen a little, because I had a few wine dates to my place that didn't close. My text game and closing skill is not yet good, so that is also a reason. I bought the product, so I should be able to fix that.
What I'm thinking for my next bio:
LMU CS/Philosophy
World traveler of 20 countries. Quadrilingual. Wine.
Grew up in Italy, so I know the secret recipies for amazing pasta.
Weaknesses include intelligence, humor and a nice bootie.
EDIT: I asked my ex-girlfriend, she called me and was super angry lol
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16 Posts (+66), 242 Cmts (+331)
Honestly I would focus on taking more photos. And have plenty of non-smiling pics. More masculine, sexual pics so you can work with a more sexual bio and text game. You are great looking and I think it would work very well for you. If you get an actual photographer, make sure you tell them what kind of vibe you want from them because I don't like most of your poses, slightly too feminine. The wine pics are good.
10 Posts (+141), 139 Cmts (+107)
Good start with your bio. Alex would probably argue to sexualize even a bit more ("Dominant") however. You might not want to mention Computer Science (assuming that's what CS stands for in your case), that has a lot of negative stereotypes associated.
With the same caveat per usual that I'm not nearly an expert at photos, I'd not use any of your old photos, except maybe the bird. You can get a WAY better gym photo than that. I think your 4th photo in, arms extended on the railing and looking closer to the camera, could be a good photo, but probably not as your #1.
Thanks for the feedback. I think it's a good idea to remove CS, should I remove Philosophy as well?
I also thought about writing "Dominant" in my bio. I'm not sure if it is congruent with my pics, because I tend to smile a lot. What do you think?
10 Posts (+141), 139 Cmts (+107)
Yeah, congruence matters a lot, if your pics don't show it, I wouldn't say it. I'm not as sure about Philosophy, but I am sure it's not as much a negative as CS.
393 Posts (+1.3K), 15K Cmts (+5.3K)
You have some pretty good pics and some pretty shitty pics. But we can definitely put a profile together from what you have. For your first pic, go with the one of you holding the glass of wine, looking away to the side. For your second pic, go with the one with the bird. Third pic, is you jumping off the boat. Make the fourth pic the one with the red hat. That will give you an above average profile for sure.
Not a big fan of the new bio, sounds like an odd collection of random things you are bragging about. I would definitely redo that part. Keep us updated on how it goes man
4 Posts (+2), 12 Cmts (+3)
Doing pretty well so far, 23 matches in 3 days. Also changed my Bio to:
LMU Philosophy, grew up in Italy, quadriligual, love adventure and sports
Weaknesses include intelligence and a nice bootie
what do you think?
EDIT: Just matched with two roommates I think, they both have the same pic as number 1 and the same distance. How should I handle this? Is there a way to turn this into a threesome lol?
393 Posts (+1.3K), 15K Cmts (+5.3K)
Looking good man.
I would the second line to: Weaknesses include a sense of humor, intelligence, and a great bootie