New to game , learning from PWF

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I am practically new to game , need advice and constant motivation to be a fine text game artist like you all gentlemen here. Installed hinge app yesterday night after reading the contents of forum and watching the YouTube channel's videos for days.
Attached screenshots are the results so far. Please , do tell me your insights , suggestions and criticisms regarding these screenshots. Messaged 10 girls 2 replied so far. Thank you in advance!

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avilench . Avatar

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Welcome to the community. This is all too gamey for my taste. I actually have a video coming out tomorrow that will be very relevant to your post. I think it should point you in the right direction

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L

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Update, after all this she said " Don't wanna do anything romantic with you and unmatched.
What could I have done otherwise? Please give me an example what you would have messaged. What should I message on hinge to get matches without coming off as gamey , any canned opener?.
Will you see my profile?

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Max Fox Avatar

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Any canned opener will seem gamey. Until you get calibrated the only canned opener you're allowed to use is "hey trouble". But just watch the video Alex is about to post, then you won't need canned openers.

This conversation didn't work for even one moment. You need to master how to be a normal guy, before you start trying to game.

First we grab a coffee

"then we sit comfy on the couch, chatting, vibing, seeing if we have a real connection"

why would you buy coffee then drink wine? it just makes no sense as a date idea and the girl calls you on it instantly. You didn't pick up on this, so she tells you again that she didn't like your idea. You didn't pick up on that either. You need to listen to what your fellow humans are saying.

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avilench . Avatar

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This text exchange comes off a bit cringe. No offense. Your opener came on way too strong. You’re also sending her three messages for every text she’s sending you back. If I had to guess she probably went like “eh this guy is gonna be wierd”

Take a look at some of my text breakdown videos to get a better idea of good text game

Cheers,
Alex

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Max Fox Avatar

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welp, I'm going to have a little practice at opening off these photos. but a lot of them I would not have picked to reply to.

pole dancing etc

should have avoided this one unless you're an expert in one of the areas
"All I know about pole dancing is, guys should wear two pairs of undies, ouch!"

blue dress

"Love the glamour, what was the occasion?"

champagne

no idea. "hey trouble"!

big tyre

"there's got to be a story behind that"

first we grab a coffee

"then we sit comfy on the couch, chatting, vibing, seeing if we have a real connection"

jumped off a train

what I want to say: "that is a truly shite travel story"
what I spose I'd say: "same thing happened to me in Korea! lucky the trains are like 2 mins apart"

too many choices

"I can't deal with the gelato counter, I spend so long deciding they have to thaw me out"

busy with work

"what are you passionate about?"

dog

"is that your doggo?"

get someone who looks at you like

no idea. "hey trouble"!

you love beer

yours works here but should be "Up for a Corona?"

felt cute

got nuthin. "hey trouble"!

woke up like this

yours works here, totally rekt on the conversation though. don't describe yourself as moody or an introvert, moody is scary and introvert is unsexy. don't discuss religion.

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L

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I see what I did wrong, in comparison to your responses my responses will seem trolling to a girl, which wouldn't get me nothing. Now I'll too , try with a funny observation or a genuine engaging question. Thanks for the post :-)

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