You went from 0 to 100 in one message. It works only with girls in explicit DTF mode.

You need to start by feeding the girl the idea of a "romantic" meeting before proposing anything. It's important the "romantic" part. If you don't show intent she'll take it as a platonic date and will freak out when you try to escalate on her during the date.

Continue by qualifying her while throwing some DHV at yourself. It can be anything really:"I can get bored quickly, I like my woman with a pinch of craziness and two big spoons of sexiness and spontaneity" and than you let her qualify to you with whatever answer she comes up.

Keep going with some compliance test. By this I mean you have to make her agree on minor things before she can say yes to the date. A good example frequently used here is "do you like wine?". Rarely a woman will say no, than you ask "red or white?", whatever she answers she's already investing in the idea of you two meeting by just thinking about it. And you conclude with the proposal to come to your place. This works for different reasons: you show enough intent; you lead her, which is attractive to women; you make her invest in the idea of you two.

I would go with something like "My autocorrect must have a dirty mind"

You sure did go from 0 to 100. If you want to stay at 100 and see what happens:

"Do you like what you see?"

If you want to take it back down to 70:

"Just getting jacked for our romantic date"