Need some feedback on my profile
7 Posts (+1), 95 Cmts (+8)
Hey,
some guys on Facebook said that I'm more likely to get good feedback here than on the Facebook group as Alex and others are more active so I thought why not give it a try.
Would appreciate some feedback about my profile. Barely getting matches here in Germany, was wondering if it's because of the new algorithm, the sexual bio inspired by David (might be tryhard because of the countries/too long, too sexual for Germany, girls might be put off because it's English) or something else because I think my profile is in the top 10% of guys since I worked on it a ton over the years.
Without the pic with the girl I'm getting even less. I know normally pics with a single girl are bad, but all women I asked about it loved it because it doesn't seem romantic like she's my gf or ex, it looks candid, sympathetic and like women can be themselves around me.
With the attached pic as my first I'm getting some more likes and matches but I feel it's not Congruent with the bio, too friendly. Of all the girls I asked, even random ones on the street, the Smiling one and the black and white one were their favorites.
About the Smiling one they said I have a million dollar smile, look happy, attractive and sympathetic. About the Black and white one they said I look like a businessman, confident, dominant, stylish and hot.
Also at this point I wanna thank everyone who created PWF, the Program is amazing and helped me a lot so far!
Cheers
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13 Posts (+9), 79 Cmts (+26)
I'd stick with English for sure, maybe use one line in German but you have the flag and the trilingual thing so that's not that needed imo.
13 Posts (+9), 79 Cmts (+26)
Did you try testing the 2nd as the first? I'd use the shirtless close up for sure, but also working on getting an activity based shirtless one this summer. Show off that body
7 Posts (+1), 95 Cmts (+8)
Yeah that's my end goal, but for now I consider my profile better than 90% of the guys yet I can't get matches something must be horribly wrong.
I've tried the 2nd as first but even I myself think it's boring and not interesting as it's inside
7 Posts (+1), 95 Cmts (+8)
This was another profile I had in mind, add the Smiling one as first with 2 Shirtless ones it shouldn't come across as too Friendly but could also be tryhard. But the Smiling one got me the most likes for years
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393 Posts (+1.3K), 15K Cmts (+5.3K)
I'm really not a fan of your first, stick with the order I recommended going off the profile in your original post. I'm not a fan of your current first at all and I think 6 is over kill since you've got 4.
23 Posts (+21), 65 Cmts (+28)
How about the matches you do get? Do they usually end up in (fuck) dates?
I am also in Germany and for the last couple weeks I put my bio in English.
So far it actually seems like a better option since some of that stuff doesnt translate that well into German.
In welcher Stadt bist eigentlich?
7 Posts (+1), 95 Cmts (+8)
Some do, some don't because I still match with time waster but I haven't been using the Bio for long. Before I always used a Bio to show my Humor to filter out boring girls, something like "I'm here because my mother wants me out of the house, so she can put my room on Airbnb" or even "Message me if you wanna be my partner in crime. Actual crime, like robbing a bank or burning down a school 😈" the Crime one made lots of girls write me first but I matched with way too many Shy/prude girls or ones looking for a relationship that's why I wanted a sexual one to filter them out.
I'm from, Hamburg, but I think the sexual bio would work better if I was in Berlin as that's even more liberal and multicultural.
I translated the Bio into German now as an experiment and made it shorter and less bragging, actually doesn't sound so bad.
195cm | 🇩🇪/🇪🇸
• Himmlische Oral Skills
• Dominant
• Mario Kart Champion
• Fantastische Gene
• Weinliebhaber
• Katzen > Hunde
• Kuschelexperte
• Keine Straftaten
• Muss Sinn für Humor haben!
Meine Schwächen: Schöne Hintern, süße Stimmen, große Frauen & ein sympathisches Lächeln
23 Posts (+21), 65 Cmts (+28)
Himmlisch haha, gute Übersetzung. Let me know how the german version works. Maybe I gotta translate mine as well.
23 Posts (+21), 65 Cmts (+28)
I made similar experiences that often times I'd match with the prude girls and relationship seekers. My bio isn't as explicit as yours but the booty line helped already to screen out some.
I also kept the Bio in English to attract international girls, sometimes my fellow German girls and I don't really click.
Thinking the same, in Berlin you'd probably be crushing it more. but Hamburg should be good?
393 Posts (+1.3K), 15K Cmts (+5.3K)
You do have a solid set of pictures, I would just recommend switching up the order. Try making 4 as the first, then 1, then 6, then 2, then 3, then 5.
In terms of your bio, I would put the sexual stuff more near the middle or end. First say something about traveling, then about bi or trilingual. And move the sexual stuff further down. Also, for your weaknesses just say nice legs and cute smiles ( you are in Germany there's going to be a lack of big booties there. And also I'm not a fan of saying talls girls because it's really vague and some girls who are tall might not consider themselves tall.)
PS you were right in posting here, the free group has moved to the forums :)
7 Posts (+1), 95 Cmts (+8)
Thanks for replying Alex, I appreciate it a lot! Why would you remove 6? My thought behind it was that it's closer and could make girls more horny as my six pack is also visible, than 4 which is quite far away.
Also what do you think of completely removing great oral skills and just keep Dominant? I think my city is too conservative for that and girls here are hesitant about admitting that they like Sex because they're afraid of being slut shamed (Subconsciously and Implicitly DTF) they always would rather talk about cuddling, watching a Disney movie etc. than directly about Sex.
That's also the only dates I really do, that end up in Sex. Haven't had a single date where the girl didn't need an excuse like that for coming to mine which is why this bio used to work well "Triple Gold Medal in the SWC (Spooning World Championships) 2016-2018. 🥇🏅🥇"
And also why would you put a posed picture first where I'm Shirtless and my face isn't visible at all? I thought the Eyes are very important and should always be visible on the first picture
I would love to hear the thought process behind the changes you recommended
393 Posts (+1.3K), 15K Cmts (+5.3K)
The logic for removing the shirtless selfie is the logic for removing the "great oral skills". It's pretty blatant and makes girls automatically think "this guys thinking for just a one night stand". If you say your city is conservative (which I totally believe bc other guys in Germany have told me the same thing) then removing the shirtless selfie and the great oral skills is the right move.
In terms of why I thought that picture should be your main, is bc its very attention grabbing it doesn't look posed at all. You look like a tall dark handsome guy thats doing high value shit (no homo). That will capture girls interest and make her look at your other pics, as long as you clearly show your face in the picture after that I think it's fine. I could be wrong about this and having a face pic about your main is more optimal, but I think you should give this a shot and see what results you get. If you have any other questions don't hesitate to ask man.