Christ this is bad my guy. Couple things

• Way too long of an opener and the emojis are super unnecessary and make you look a little silly

• The takeaways are decent (Are you always this talkative?) (Don't be shy now) but the first message is quite poor so it probably didn't help much

• The spanking comment came out of nowhere dude, you were at like a 1 with her and you took it to a fucking 7 which was a mistake. Honestly, just take this as a learning lesson and try to work on your openers.

Sorry if this was harsh bro just being honest. Goodluck

this one is done lol. i would just move on.

First message is way too chodey. Commenting on music is probably what a lot of other guys do as well.

Dead my bro

this made me laugh hard. Better yet you even liked her only response. Obviously you went from way too nice to way too sexual at the drop of a hat. I've been there man.