Coming across as a little arrogant/butthurt with a couple lines, mainly the ones about swiping (not swapping) and not having time for text buddy. It sounds like you’re bitter from being cuckolded and being a pen pal. I would keep the rest just drop those lines, they don’t bring positive vibes!

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Mostly good but i’d take out all that swipe left and i’ll reject you lines. It seems too cocky in abad way. Leaves an impression that you are purposely saying that to appear more confident/dominant but in reality you aren’t. Not saying thats how you are its just the impression i got after reading this.