Hey players, just did a photoshoot and I'm looking feedback on my bio. Currently running 1, 2, 3, 4 and 5 in that order at the moment. Thanks a lot!
Bio:
Just the right amount of wholesome and naughty (or maybe dominant?).
Strengths:
Peachy booty
Sarcasm
Travel
Whispering Russian in your ear
Weaknesses:
Peachy booty
Sarcasm
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11 Posts (+22), 395 Cmts (+179)
Try tweaking pic 5. Pic 4 is meh. Pic 1 is ok; you could still do better for sure. Try a look with Blazer + glasses (hipster or sun)
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393 Posts (+1.3K), 15K Cmts (+5.3K)
replace 3 with 12 and post a screenshot with how it all looks together, in terms of your bio i would change it around a bit.
You can go with something like:
My passion is traveling around the world and seductively whispering in your ear
Strengths: Being Dominant, Cooking and Cuddling
Weakens: Great ass, Intelligence, Accents and Cute Smiles
5 Posts (+0), 68 Cmts (+29)
I think placing 1, 2 and 3 together is a bit repetitive? Let me know if you have any other feedback.
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393 Posts (+1.3K), 15K Cmts (+5.3K)
i would say delete your current number 2 all together and make 3 your main and put your current main as last. Then post a screen shot.
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Shirtless pic has gotta go. From your original pics you can try work in number 10 or 17 maybe.