The "you can make it up for me on our date" text can be good but definitely not in a situation like this where she hasn't even given you any compliance yet, the convo just started lol. You're basically bringing up the general idea of hanging out after noncompliance. After her first response I would've said "Ah she lives :)" since I'm assuming you waited a few days to re-engage the convo with a double text

I think the last text comes off a bit needy and too serious. You want her to make up for not responding to one of your texts? You pretty much gave her an ultimatum and she didn't like that. That's why I don't really like the whole "make it up to me" thing.