Many of your photos are too similar and appear to be taken on the same day. Cut it down to 6 diverse photos. The first photo is weak, I would replace that one. I like the sunset photo the best, that is pretty dope (maybe a good first photo). You need more activity photos and different outfits but you're on the right track. You just need more interesting photos where you aren't standing around. 3,6, and 7 are the best

All your pics are the same. Whittle them down to your 3 best. Less is more in your case.
You're relatively photogenic. Have your mates take more pics when you're out and about and get some more pics over time, in different outfits and locations
The pic in the sunset in front of the water: you look younger (and less manly) than in the other pics.

Still needs a bit of work. I like that there's a lot of traveling pics but the lighting is pretty bad on a few of them. I would focus on getting better fashion and better quality/poses for the pictures. Take a look at my IG for examples I use @siralexz