feedback? weird feeling for a good set

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T

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Hey, what's up?

I started this set with this cutie from bumble and at some point.

I will be happy to receive your feedback

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avilench . Avatar

393 Posts (+1.3K), 15K Cmts (+5.3K)

Same feedback I usually give you man. Don’t be so gamey and close optimally. I have videos on both of these topics

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T

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man. that's a long convo. there was mass of comfort here. I saw it.

then, maybe the videos are not enough and I do not get your idea.

in 80% if the examples that you show, you are surer gamy and schedule for like after 2 screenshots.

Here I was like, maybe 35%-40% gamey and the convo was spread around 5-6 screenshots (these are 3 screenshots, but long ones). please tell me here by words what was it that I should have talked to her more about? specifically here. That way I will learn your point.

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avilench . Avatar

393 Posts (+1.3K), 15K Cmts (+5.3K)

Not sure why you ask me for feedback and then argue with what I say. Maybe I can do a video on your “text game” at some point. In the meantime let’s take when you ask her “do you like wine”

She says
“Yes, Red”

There’s no need to do a fake takeaway here

“Oh I like white so we won’t get along :)))”

Unecessary gameyness

Instead

“Cool, we should split a bottle sometime soon”

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