I'm not an expert but I definitely notice a few things. You're not looking at the camera in any of the photos, that's major overkill, at least 1 should be you straight on looking at the camera. Not a fan of the cat photos either as it looks like it's trying to escape and cats don't convey positive masculine qualities. The bench one looks by far the most natural in my opinion. Black sofa one is usable.

4, 7, 2 are your best ones to me.. lead with those

I would only go with 7 and 10 which can be your 3rd and onwards. You need more photos where you are less posed, more distinct outfits, and have better lighting.