that line is fine here yes but the girl is clearly not very invested so even if she agrees to go out, there is a high chance she will flake. i'd banter back in forth more, get her investment up and then try to invite her out again
edit: oh thats the same girl from your previous post.. yea u 2 barely even had any conversation so she isnt invested at all


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Frame is good. I would work a touch on that date close text. The housemate part feels like your handling an objection that she hasn't made, and also the image of that kills the sex vibe a bit. I always work the phrase "no expectations" into a date close. I would respond "So I suppose dinner is off the table? ;)"
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I feel that. Thanks for the tips
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she'll laugh or respond in the affirmative to that, then i would say "I want to meet you in public first to ensure that you're not secretly a 300 pound Albanian man. If the vibe feels right, we can have a drink. If not, a laugh and hug. No expectations"