Cute Bumble match - came in at 11pm, and she seemed pretty invested - visiting from out of state
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This is for Indian PE....just wanted to get your thoughts on how this is going so far, and see if I am heading in the right direction here - I incorporated some of your lines, but in a way that made sense to me and seemed to flow I think. Any feedback/critique would be greatly appreciated - thanks again for all you do!
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It's okay man, a bit too gamey for my taste. But, not too over the top like I see quite often. I'd honestly start moving it towards the close, since time is not on your side
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Any update btw?