Bio review
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3 Cmts
6y ago
5 Posts (+2), 372 Cmts (+206)
Hey friends, I'd like to get your feedback on my profile text.
I'm 36 and looking to date younger.
I've got a photoshoot lined up for when the bio's solid. I know that congruent photos are key, so I'll give the photographer the bio and he can make it happen.
182cm | Melbourne | Entrepreneur & Educator
- Great oral skills
- Dominant
- 30+ countries visited
- Finally took a trip where I didn't use my travel insurance
- Save about one life a week
- Passionate about salsa & bachata
- Dogs
- Company owner
- Expert cuddler
- Gringo Spanish
MY WEAKNESSES: Cute smiles, Daddy's girl, Yoga pants, Adorkables, Nice booties
393 Posts (+1.3K), 15K Cmts (+5.3K)
I think you got the order flipped man. It all starts with the pictures. The bio is just an extension of that. In terms of what you have, it's more or less fine. There are just several changes I'd make. Get rid of "Save about one life a week". Also, space out "Dominant" and "Great Oral skills" so they are not back to back. Also, get rid of "Gringo Spanish", I doubt many ozzies would get that, that's mostly for latina girls. You can change it to something like "Fluent in Gringo Spanish and cuddling".
Get rid of "Daddy's girl" and "Adorkables" from the list of weaknesses
5 Posts (+2), 372 Cmts (+206)
Thanks man! I'll make those changes and then come back to the bio once I have new pictures.
In terms of what Aussies won't get, I think "nice booties" isn't going to translate well either. I left it in because "booties" is such a great playful word... if you say nice arses, nice boobs, nice tits, it sounds lowbrow to my ears.
393 Posts (+1.3K), 15K Cmts (+5.3K)
Yeah, I think the "Nice booties" is totally fine