Hey guys!
Currently I‘m working on a new Bio.
Some keyfacts about me:
I‘m a freelance Webdesigner and jury member @ awwwards (international Webdesign site) Furthermore I served for the German army and right now I‘m a German army Reserve.
Because of my job I travel a lot.
My current bio translated:
5‘8 | near Munich
*army reserve
*jury member
- traveler
- Bi-lingual
Looking for a cool girl to chill regularly who’s cool energy to be around
Strength: dominant, cooking, dropping inappropriate bars, cuddling
Weakness: great ass, accent, deeptalk
What would you improve?
I definitely got no idea 🤯
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"Some keyfacts about me:
I‘m a freelance Webdesigner and jury member @ awwwards (international Webdesign site) Furthermore I served for the German army and right now I‘m a German army Reserve.
Because of my job I travel a lot. "
Too logical/wordy. Using short staccato sentences is the right way to go, thus your current bio does this better.
Remove dominant / great ass from your bio unless your photos are explicitly sexual and you actually LOOK dominant.
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check out my video called "how to write the ultimate tinder bio" itll walk you thru everything., One thing i can tell you right off the top of my head is remove "5'8" from your bio. Also the whole thing is a bit too long in general. also check out some of the articles on the main site about bio. we wrote a new one recently that you will also find useful. It will be under tips/guides
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Putting your height is generally a bad idea if you are under 6ft. Im 5'10 and dont put it either. Rest looks pretty good IMO.