Girl says I’m too directScreenshots speak for themselves, I need some help as to what to say here and why. Would really appreciate it.+18 Comments8 Cmts4y agoTTom Huizen12 Posts (+8)84 Cmts (+36)TTom Huizen12 Posts (+8), 84 Cmts (+36)
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To be honest, it doesn't seem like there is a real person there. All you're using are those various lines. You gotta show a bit of a real human there as well
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Thanks, yeah I agree this convo I’m a bit too gamey. So how would you proceed?
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Maybe something like "I just go after what I want. Anyway, how's your xday going?"