Watched Alex's video and remade my own bio that was way too logical at first and so made it emotionally appealing and funny Sorta played the Tarzan theme coz I have long hair and am quite wild My main question is "Is the first picture too sexual?" It's the one where I look the best and it portrays confidence but maybe it can pass as creepy, I'm wondering šŸ¤”?

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avilench . Avatar

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no its not too sexual the problem is that your not really in shape enough to be doing shirtless photos, no offense. I think 3-6 months of training you might be there, but your not there right now thus I wouldn't use a shirtless photo currently if I were you. Also the rest of your photos are to repetitive. take a look at some the videos we have on the channel.

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Okay what about the bio tho?

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Yeah man. It's not terrible. I would probably simplify parts of it. Like, for example "My passion is traveling the world and seductively whispering in your ears"

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