Hi everybody, feedback on this conversation would be much appreciated! So this is maybe some of the weirdest things I've ever done, spending 30 minutes translating a Tinder convo into English on a web app. But I want to learn and this is one of the more recent convos that I have where I think feedback is useful. She's yet to reply to me after 24 hours. She seems invested and geared toward making plans or at least the thought of it, but you can see I've already built on the conversation and used a takeaway (I guess I fucked up a little bit asking her for suggestions?) Answers, as you can see, are normally 18+ hours apart so the flow of the conversation is a bit heavy, I overthink a little bit and I'm not sure of how fast I should try to move things forward. My main sticking point is being direct and flirty enough, I am too timid with girls in general and especially in the text which makes flirts and conversations often go nowhere. As it is a translated conversation, some of it may seem a bit weird, but I have got the main points of it.