Hi, Looking for some optimisation and critique of my current tinder profile: Pictures and bio. Thanks in advance

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J

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J

88 Posts (+49), 108 Cmts (+15)

C

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Body language needs to be better, facial expression is a bit tense

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J

88 Posts (+49), 108 Cmts (+15)

On which pictures?

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A

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1 - You look like you're wincing and your body language looks tense
2 - You look good but defo should not be your first photo
3 - You're barely in the photo, looks a bit awkward. Get one of you actually playing the decks
4 - Can't see your face. It offers no value
5 - What is this photo even doing in your profile
6 - Is a non-photo. Might as well not be there. Maybe would add a bit of value if you had other good photos

You need to write something other than the whispering in peoples ears or just get rid of it.
You've also just bullet pointed a few things that don't seem relevant to each other. Why is your instagram bullet pointed with the rest of that.
If you're in a sports club list it.

TL;DR
Organise your bio better
You need better pictures of yourself (+ ones of you doing things)

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