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Hey,
Getting a lot of leads off tinder but as soon as I move to WhatsApp the majority become less committed and more bratty. Still getting about a date a week but can you please criticize my text game? I'll post some examples:
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393 Posts (+1.3K), 15K Cmts (+5.3K)
Lol, this is your definition of a girl is being bratty? I'd say quite the opposite. She's being as nice/compliant as one could hope with that level of text game. No offense lol.
There's definitely a lot you can improve on, but I'm going to focus on the 2 biggest things.
Poor closing
Your closing is extremely suboptimal. Basically, it consists of you hitting her up out of nowhere on random days and asking if she's feeling spontaneous. That's an extremely poor way of doing it. A much better strategy is to get her to agree to the general idea of hanging out with you. Then figure out her schedule. Then propose a specific date based on that information.
Purposeless texting
The majority of your text don't really seem to have a purpose and or adding unnecessary complexity to this whole thing. For example, when she said she couldn't meet for wine that night, you could've just asked what night would work better for her and make plans for that.
Bam, instead of texting back and forth you could be balls deep into some lovely British pussy :)
Take a look at some of my love reports. You'll notice that the majority of my text have a clear purpose. Either DHVing, building comfort, answering objections, leading towards the meetup, setting up logistics, etc.
Think about as a game of chess, sure you can just randomly meet the pieces around the board and get luck, but if you have a purpose with every move your odds will be way higher.
Hope this helps man. Let me know if you have any followup questions.