Hey everyone, I have started online game really since octubre, have had some success. So I thought I would ask you all for general feedback on what things I can improve. Also, I don't see many LR here, is that something people are interested in? Here is the mega link since its easier to organize the screenshots, 4 different girls, 2 that ghosted me, 2 LR: https://mega.nz/folder/FL0n0Zba#U1P0S0Zii41QURZCebDjGw

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2022-10-02: the end feels too scipted
2022-11-04: She is not invested at all in the convo and you close to soon + "yo" into "wyd" is pretty bad for a reengage

In the 2 succeses you find a fun subject "drinking champ" and "kissing virginity" that keep the convos fun and keeps the girl invested

Now, Im no pro, but in the 2 fails you had to resort to "killer workout" line which indicates you are just autopiloting (or running a script) and the others you get the convo to flow naturally

But ofc that's just my 2 cents ^^

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I think you are totally right. I would also say that I get to the hook point (where the convo gets interesting) fast when it works, then it's not a lot of messages until I can close. But when I don't get to the hook point I still try to go at the same place & it doesn't work. Any thoughts on how to approach convos when I don't get the hook point immediately?

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