New Bio feedback

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Hey all,

I've been working on a new bio for my profile.


Old bio
I'll touch your butt aas much as you touch my beard.

Reasons you should swipe right:

  • amazing cocktails
  • epic beard
  • more fun than your ex
  • my dog needs a mum

New bio
6'ft | Newcastle

My passion is data wizardry, making cocktails and seductively whispering in your ear.

Strengths: Being Dominant, charming and a great cuddler

Weaknesses: Great Ass, Intelligence and Cute Smiles

Any feedback would be greatly appreciated. I know the pic aren't great so I'm working on that asap.

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You kind of look like Adam Savage and he's rich and famous so he would naturally feel attractive and high value which showes in his photos. I took some pictures of him off the internet so you can see some decent shots that you should try an recreate. Also is style is all black tshirts and basic stuff which I think looks great on almost anyone and shows that you "get it"

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K

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Thanks I hadn't thought of it but you're right, I do kind of look like him. Getting a photo session done next week so will keep it in mind.

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Clinton Woodall Avatar

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Good news too is you look like a younger version

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avilench . Avatar

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Your bio is fine man. The issue is definitely your pics. I like the one where you're holding your dog. But the rest is no go. I definitely recommend trimming your beard. Also, pop in contacts or just take off glasses for photoshoots. This will make a difference altogether

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K

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Cheers for the feedback man, that's good to hear.
I've changed up my style quite a bit since these pics were taken (they were all pre-separation).
Got the hair and beard nicely trimmed. Just need to get a mate to take some pics for me.

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avilench . Avatar

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Perfect. Keep us posted

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avilench . Avatar

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avilench . Avatar

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Yo man. The sitting down photo was good. We added a smile to it. And I think it's a lot better now. Give that a shot

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K

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Thanks mate that's a great pic. I put it as my main and definitely seen an improvement to my likes and matches

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K

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Hey avilench . which of the other pics would be usable? The only other pics I have are from my original post. I'll get some more soon but will need to use the photoshoot ones until then.
Also will these pics be congruent with the new bio below? Or should I tune that up a bit as well?

6'ft | Data Scientist | Newcastle
My passion is data wizardry, making cocktails and seductively whispering in your ear.
Strengths: charming, great cuddler, never forgets bin night
Weaknesses: Intelligence, cute smiles... and sometimes I forget bin night

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