Is there a way I could make this smooth ?

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K. F. Avatar

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K. F. Avatar

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"Yes you better get to it. We'll open a wine and reading club together"

"Yes, and then, you could tell me on our date "Why do we sleep" "

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Hey Trouble Avatar

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i think you can phrase it better. don't need to repeat the book title.

"good idea. finish it so you can tell me about it on our date"

also it's called book club.

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avilench . Avatar

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"Is my handsomeness keeping you up or what?"

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