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I wanted to get some feedback on my text. Hopefully you see them in order

I tried to play it slightly cocky towards the end but clearly it came across cringy.

Not really sure what to say next since I think it's over and done with.

Thoughts on where I fucked up and what to say next?

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avilench . Avatar

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Bro, what are you talking about? This is definitely far from done. Your text game here was decent. I might have done a few things better here & there but i didn't see anything that cringe in anything that you said. She's replying & investing a decent amount. At this point, I would just change gears and move the conversation in a different direction.

You can say something like "Is that your alter ego"

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C

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She posted a gif of Mindy Kaling..

I'm thinking "well Mindy, what are you looking for on here?"

And then just move forward to the wine close.

We've been bantering for a while now.

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avilench . Avatar

399 Posts (+1.3K), 16K Cmts (+5.3K)

Yeah man, that works. Give it a shot.

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Theo Victor Avatar

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Disclaimer: 25 y/o with a 15 lay count, ergo by no means infallible
don't think u fucked up completely. that myers-briggs joke was fun, she responded well. message on Thursday 7:12 pm id say u blundered. would not have continued her line bout ur mom. also, "you'll be saying bout me" seems too crass too soon.

Instead could have finished this banter with ,example " that's my personality, pinky promise. hows your thursday going so far"
u already have her attention. no need to overgame.

now with that britney gif, try to take the convo from u to her, ask her "don't tell me u like britney spears music" or " wow britney came a long way, she used to be smokin hot "

keep us updated how it went
cheers
Theo

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C

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Thanks for taking the time to respond bro! Appreciate it.

I wanted to run with the "mom" thing to keep it fun. But fun turned to crass as you said.

Will keep you posted!

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