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your two potential replies feel emotionally flat and the goal is to make her feel emotions that would make her want to come out with you but i'm not good enough to give you a killer response, I'm new at this too
brainstorming with you:
no worries we can rinse off after our date and get rid of any sand
you could also change threads:
do you like wine / surfing / etc.
after this though I think you're good to move into logistics of the date
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"Ah I guess we won't be building a sandcastle then"
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Went with this. What do you think of my response?
Or take a step back
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Don't send the text you have in your suggestion. At this point, I would just go for the wine close. Since you framed yourself as a man who goes for what he wants. Any dilly daddling will be incongruent.