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Hey People, I would love some feedback on my bio. Please be critical, I can take it...I think.

I'm the CEO of an automation company building machines for growing food in space, but I don't really like talking about it.

If fitness, nutrition, and education are not important to you then we probably aren’t going to get along.

Also I'm a very silly person so you'd have to put up with that as well. Kidding of course, I'm actually quite serious.

PS: I’d prefer to be at least a foot taller than you

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Nah bro, this won't work. This reads way too much like a resume. Have you gone through the bio chapter of the product? Tell me the following things

  1. Your height,
  2. Any other languages you speak
  3. What city are you in
  4. Anything cool or high value about you
  5. What kind of girls do you like physically and personality wise
  6. Are you looking to bang a bunch of chicks/gf or something in the middle?
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Thanks for the honest feedback! Of course I didn't read the bio chapter before writing that nerdy shit. I'm going to attach the current state of my tinder profile, please let me know what you think (Including photos and order)

As far as the questions you are asking:

  1. 6'4

  2. Remedial spanish

  3. Woodstock, NY

  4. Founder and owner of successful tech/robotics company (Was in a google program which is why i put it in my bio), our machines are for growing plants (mostly weed), we are sponsoring Cornell university greenhouses with tech (That's why I put it as my school), own a house and office in upstate ny, have apartment in manhattan, vegan for 6 years (I don't think it's good to put since some girls don't like it), other nerdy stuff like I've won math and programming competitions, and working with NASA to build machines for growing food in space

  5. Physically: Athletic, great butt and legs, aesthetically pleasing breasts, darker complexion (israli, brazilian, jewish american (I’m half jewish on my moms side but not religious), white american, iranian, some latina girls), Natural beauty (doesn’t need a lot of up to look their best and looks great without any makeup), brunette or dirty blonde with straight hair.
    Personality: able to have stimulating conversations with me, sense of humor, kind of outgoing (like she can think of stuff to say on her own), open minded, doesn't give me shit all the time, has interesting job, thinks I'm amazing and compliments me, submissive to me, down for adventures, high sex drive and interested in crazy sex (anal), good at dirty talking, sexy lingerie, ffm 3 somes, exercises with me, open to some drugs, but not a druggie, open to new interesting ways of living, likes that im vegan, is vegan herself or wants to be, isn't going to make other areas of my life suffer such as sleep, work or health

  6. I'm interested in both (If I get into a relationship should be on my terms and might be an open relationship, I definitely do not want to settle or settle down)

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6'4
My passion is traveling the world and seductively whispering Spanish in your ear
Strengths: Being dominant, Advanced robotics, and cuddling
Weaknesses: Great Ass, cute smiles, and intelligence

Here's a very basic stock bio. You can add or subtract a few things here

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